At the flower shop she made her choice.
She'd found the one with nicest bloom.
In her expertise she did rejoice,
This plant would glorify her room.
And then at home, a fine surprise!
Beneath the leaves was another shoot
That had escaped her searching eyes
And defiantly had taken root.
She was intrigued, and marvelled at
This little plant – what could he be?
Exotic species? no doubt about that!
Unique and special she could see.
She named him "Survivor", and sought to tell
His story to all who saw him there.
She watched him grow and thrive so well –
A testament to her skillful care.
And then one day, she learned that he
Was a common weed that had taken root
In another's pot – and shamefully
She'd mistaken him for a special shoot.
"Survivor", she thought, was her claim to fame
But her judgment of him had been too rash.
In the end he had only brought her shame.
She threw him away with the trash.
1999
(From the book Discoveries In The Dark by Doris Potter)
© Doris Potter
Maybe throwing him away was a little rash, too. Some weeds produce beautiful flowers.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't agree more messymimi! :-)
DeleteThat is quite the story, Doris, and a very human one. I think it might be against the rules for you to post paoetry during the week, however.
ReplyDeleteI was trying to correct my spelling and add a smiley, but I hit the wrong button. 😜
ReplyDeleteWell, your comment made ME smile. I have broken the weekend rule - such a rebel! Yes, the story is a human one and a true one. I identified with the weed. :-)
DeleteI like this one, it made me smile until the sad ending. xx
ReplyDeleteSorry for the sad (but true) ending, Flighty. My next poem is a complete change of pace. :-)
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